Gone In The Wind

by Bianca   Nov 4, 2006


I thought you loved me. It was all an act. I thought you loved me. But instead you betrayed me. I thought you loved me for all those years. I thought you loved me. You caused all my tears. I thought you loved me. I want you to die. I thought you loved me. Now it is time for you to cry.

For all those people I thought loved me that betrayed me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    The rhyming scheme seemed a bit forced. I felt as if this poem lacked a certain depth; as if you didn't give it your all. anyway keep writing you'll get better. we all have to start from somewhere. when i first started; my poems sucked :) lol

    keep up the good work
    and good luck

    thanks for the comment on my poem; i appreciated it very much love. :)

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