Valire

by StarlessNight   Nov 4, 2006


She was so perfect, so sweet and kind. She was pretty and had a brilliant mind. The way she smiled made your heart melt. She knew your problems and just what you felt.

She knew just what you needed, when you were feeling low. She helped you get to places that she knew you wanted to go. When you were in trouble she helped you out. The thing I always loved was that she never had to shout.

She had curly red hair. And she would always care. She protected you when you needed her most. And she knew that the way to heal you was to talk about the coast.

So you see she was perfect in each and every way. Until you came along that day. I don’t know why you did it. All your excuses are total bull shit.

Out of this world you took her. Your very own beautiful daughter. You took her away from me. She was the only one who could see.

She was the only one who could save me. Why was that her fate to be? I miss her so much. I miss her soft tender touch.

I hate you is what I want to say. But I know she wouldn’t want it that way. Your daughter she was a smart one. She always knew how to have fun.

Your daughter was my best friend. And we promised each other it would stay that way till the end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Oh this poem is so so good i love it. yeh i also have some great friends like that and it would be so painful to lose any of them. i hope your ok.

    this poem was really well written. i like it because it didnt have a set rythm yet it flowed so well. you captured all the right emotions well done =)
    keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    I really liked it i have a frind like this who id hate to lose so hope it isnt true.... hope your ok email me if u eva need 2..xoxoxo 5/5