Save your last breath

by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ   Nov 4, 2006


Saying i love you is losing your breath we are just living are life with death. The time you spent with me it wasn't real the way that you thought you made me feel.

Its something everyone should know It isn't something you cant show. My heart was never full, with me you've payed your toll.

You worship my pain and i can not explain the hurt that comes to mind and the heart that you cant find the girl thats dead inside is me trying to hide from the truth hes gone but is it wrong?

And why do we put an address on the same loneliness. i Swear i said i wasn't dead i swear i said i didn't no i swear i said he couldn't go i swear i made you a slight bit happy the day he went away my pain is your joy my hearts like your little toy and death is only my last breath.

(My only escape is faith)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem i can see that you have an awesome talent, let me know when you post more, shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awww..your back!!!:):):):):)...i was getting a little worried about you...but i'm so glad your back...this poem is very____ i can't find the right word but you can't just read this poem and understand it...it takes time to understand this poem i had to read it a bunch of times to really got it (if that makes any sence at all) all of your poems are so deep but this one is differnt it's deeper in adifferent sort of way...i hope your doing ok stay strong
    and DON'T EVER EVER STOP WRITTING because it would be a grave loss if you stoped you have soooooo much talent

    from your good friend auna:P

  • 17 years ago

    by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins

    Great poem. Very short, but I loved it.

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