Broken Hearted (Accrostic)

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Nov 5, 2006


B-roken heart
R-ips us apart
O-ther feelings are left to forget
K-nowing that your love is a regret
E-ven though you once loved her
N-othing matters and everything will blur

H-aving the remain of the feeling
E-very night staring at the ceiling
A-lone right now, I cant take no more
R-emembering the girl I used to adore
T-rying to forget the good times we shared
E-nded and I wasnt even prepared
D-own inside I really cared!!!

Since i was receiving messages saying they were bored of my original work i decided to use a different format.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    This sooo different from all the poems i've
    read....i rlly like it:)
    this type of poem seems hard to write
    so i guess this rlly shows you have talent...

    p.s.
    you're original work is not boring...
    that's what actually makes it special....that it's original:]

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Bored of your original work? cheeky gits lol
    This is a really good style, I havnt seen many like this =] Brilliant job you express your feeling very well in this format

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    This was a well written poem. Usually these kinds of poems are hard to flow, but yours flowed very nice. Good Job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    It was Beautiful Shaun... very unique XD I'm also srry....

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Love it

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