Souls Ablaze

by Hannah Emellia   Nov 6, 2006


Destruction is knocking at my door,
It's been there since the night before,
I'm fearing what it'll do to me,
But what it's done I already see,

Carvings on our children's spines,
A thousand stories in one line,
Freedom gone- forever in the past,
They've read this story, from first to last,

Coldness is my enemy,
Souls ablaze inside of me,
My heart is here for all to see,
Just kill me now... And set me free...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Another one... It is excellent, every stanza is majestic but second is still my favorite. You have great talent and this poem is superb.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Holy hannah (haha I didn't mean to use your name there)! This poem is flippin awesome! It painted the darkest picture! I love it! I escpecially the last two lines. Those were amazing, a perfect way to end a great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Holy crap. are you really only 13?? this poem is amazing, so are the others of yours ive read. you really have alot of talent!! keep writing. <3<3

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Very good write. awesome flow. i enjoyed it!

  • 17 years ago

    by scars and stories

    This poem is a little disturbing, I really like it. It's super powerful, expecially the last stanza.

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