OMG Joe this poem was sooooo cute =]This will make Liz like smile big time....so beautiful. Wonderful Job Italian man. 5/5

Great poem great emotion made me cry...lol...no lie i love all ur poems keep up good work. :)

M'Azing Joe, simple M'Azing. It was beautiful like a man and woman loving each other, and they're beautiful and stuff. Great stuff. A definate five, yo.

A very beautiful poem i really enjoy readinng ur poems u r gr8!!!

God bless u

Awwww.......very nice poem..it was just made me go awwww....lol keep writing!!

Great job!

Problems:
I'm picky about... sentence structure... Such as: And That I'd never want to lose... That needs to be uncapitalized... add some commas and periods it helps the reader pause and it makes the poem flow smoother...

Goodies:

I LOVED IT! I love your story, it makes me smile! I love your last stanza the best!

5/5

Very nice very good great writing

Awe. Joe, this was realllly sweeet!!! Me loved it. Sorry my comments are dumb but I just can't write anything useful! Blah. This was cute and sweet and stuff. 5/5

-Poetess

One minor thing... "if you where"

Where should be were*

"just knowing your in my presence"

you're*

"then I'd know you where in my life forever"

were*

Okay, now that I've edited the grammar, time to tell you what I think lol. Let's see... I absolutely love it. The imagery is great. You definitely display your love for this girl very well! Well done, Sloppy Joe. 5/5 from me :)

~BJ~

Very nice...heart felt...not much construction...but i can still feel what ur trying to express

Wow, that was a wonderful write, You can feel the love with each word. Excellent Job! 5/5

sadaddy

A very nice poem indeed. I loved the emotion and all the expression .. I loved how it just flowed and everything. It was a piece that I truly like. A very good job! 5/5

Yet again another great poem Joe! Great job. 5/5

Joe! Ohmy! This poem is sooooo sweet.

It's awesome.

I gave a five.

I loved the last stanza, it was really lovely.

-.- Take Care,
N-G-C-S.

I loved it. Its very sweet. Good job 5/5

I liked this poem, it was good... work on your flow again, but it was really cute. nice poem, 5/5

Very nice write joe!.. good work,

not sure what else to say, but i enjoyed reading it buddy! ~joey

Omg that is so sweet if im correct its about Liz and shes lucky to have you

Wow, this is a beautiful poem... loved it, great use of words to create emotion...

Holding me close and kissing each other
Moments after we said, "I Do"

aww i like how you ended this one! very nice job... i cant seem to put my finger on anything that needs work... keep it up!