Dreams

by lonely princess   Nov 7, 2006


If i could tell you my dream, would you listen?
OK, here goes....

Last night, i dreamt you were here, that nothing bad had happened, and it never would, not to you or me at least.

I guess it was strange that you left, you was only 16, you didn't deserve to be taken away when i needed you the most, babe he was a monster, i wish you had never met him!

I dreamt that we never had that stupid argument and that instead of being in his car, you and me was watching our favourite film at home.

If only dreams were a reality, you`d still be here, you`d still be a big sister, an aunt, a daughter. You`d still be my best friend.

I miss you, I always have, and each year gets harder Kay, it`ll soon be three years babe, but it feels like only yesterday that I lost my best friend.

I miss you more and more each day, I hope your OK babe?

Love you always

Abi
xxxxxxxxx

p.s pls leave me comments and vote, i like to no if theres anything i could change, thanks xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a very touching and heartfelt piece. It definitely captures the emotion and loss for someone dear. As far as changing anything, you may wish to play around with the line breaks/stanzas to put more emphasis on the more powerful phrases/sections, perhaps make the final line a statement rather than a question, but that is up to you. Again, a very touching piece.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka