Comments : Selfish boy

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Awesome poem your very talented. and thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    =)

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    AHH !!!!!! FFFFFFFFFAAAVVVOOOORRRIIIITTTEEEE POEM EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, i absolutely loved this. I'm not sure if it's because I can relate to just about all of it, or what. But anyways, it's great! =]

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    AHH IM COMMENTING AGAIN because every time i read this poem i LOVE LOVELOVELOVE it more and more and more and moe and more and more.. ect.. lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. i loved this poem. it was superb. the descriptions were great, and i loved how it flowed! you are a wonderful writer! keep up the amazing work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love this one.... i feel like that sometimes. the rhythm is amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it lol
    the emotion and intensity was marvelous
    beautiful