Sounds like an ouchy breakup. those are the worst. best to find a super guy who'll never hurt you like that, though, then to go back to being friends with someone who did.
great poem,
parker

Break-ups are the worst, but this poem was very well written. I really liked the flow and the way it was structured. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Ya ... this was really sad!
i know exatcly how it felt...
i can really realate to this poem...
it was heartfelt as well...
and you really did put alot of emotions into it...
keep it up!

This was a good poem it says a lot about relationships i liked it 5/5

Aww. i can really relate to this one. another brilliant poem!!
much love and many kisses,
bex