Wow that was such a good poem beautifully written great job keep it up

Amazing !!
wish i cud give u more but cud only give a 5/5

i can relate to this poem...
i can sense the hurt
ur poem is very well written
keep it up

i'd love it if u cud vote & comment on my poem
murder or suicde
i'll return favour :-)

love
amy

Okay, word one can describe that poem: WOW.

That was amazing. So emotional. I loved it, well done.

This was a really good poem.. the first line was a bit odd.. i usually invision shivers going down someone's spine.. never up.. but oh well.. haha good the third line of the last stanza.. i didnt like the word tattooing.. maybe use painting?.. anyways really good job!.. loved the ending

Thats an awsome poem!!!
very sad though...
but it was great...
the flow was good... and the words u used were amazing :)
i really dont know what to say.... honest!!!

You have a great vocabulary! Your rhyming is simply amazing! I love this stanza the best:

Leaving me alone to die
Watching me rip apart
Laughing at me as I cry
Slowly stabbing at my heart..

Awesome Job!

5/5

Blood my body is releasing

^^This was the only line that I found sounding off. Maybe you could re-word it a little or something, but it could be just me, cause I just kinda woke up.

The rest of the poem though, was brilliant. The emotions were intense and raw, and I loved that. Another amazing piece where I wouldn't change anything. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very very very good.
I just loved it.
i don't even no what to say im
speachless.
GREAT JOB.

Wow this is amazing! 5/5

That is soo deep. excelent job. keep writing.

Wow Amazing work! I love all the emotion that went into your work, very deep! Keep it up, it was an amazing read!

I feel that poem it hit me really deep because thats me beneath the surface

That was really really really good. i usually tell people how much they suck eggs but urs is really good so keep it up
love Blacki xxxx
ps: read my gay poems,
thanks
PEACE OUT!
MWAH!
xxxxxx

Amazing poem. i love it. every emotion you try to convey is done with such flair. 5/5 xx

Aww hunny. You don't have to feel like this. I know it's an everyday teenager feeling, but...it just won't work out right in the end. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. =)

The poem...There was great flow to this. I didn't feel at all like it was forced. The rhymes were good, but could use some work. I liked the imagery and the emotion as well. It was deep, but to the point. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great poem:)

Woah. That is an amazing poem.
I could relate to it so much, and i know exactly how you feel.
5/5
=] shannon xILYx

Wow this is really good. I liked the discriptions in it. 5/5

This is a very sad piece. You did an excellent job writing it, though. Nice choice of words. My favorite stanza is the last one. 5/5.

>black&&blue

Chilling poem. You created very real images. Now, I've got a challenge for you. See if you can write a freestyle just as good^_-. I think you can. Keep it up