I Want This Boy...

by BrokenREALiTy   Nov 11, 2006


So there's this boy I like,
He's sweet and he's kind.
Always knows what to say,
At just the right time.

All the little things he does,
Brings a smile to your face.
The memories that he gives you,
You can never replace.

He's good-hearted and cool,
And his room's super neat.
Whenever you're with him,
He makes you feel complete.

Tall, dark and handsome,
With a body so strong.
He makes everything feel right,
When everything felt wrong.

If you ever need a shoulder,
Just call him up and he'll show.
And no matter what the relationship,
You'd still love him, friend or foe.

He was athletic and intellegent,
Always helped me work my stuff.
Taught me self-defense,
So I could beautiful and tough.

The things that he said,
He'd bring out the real me.
And sometimes he'd even,
Make me feel pretty.

I've started to like him,
Fallen too deep.
But I know that in truth,
This is a friendship to keep.

I can tell he sees me,
As nothing more.
Being friends used to be,
Enough for me before.

But now I can't stand it,
'Us' is all I'm thinking of.
But in his mind, we're just friends,
While for me, it's love.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cute. =] Yet sad because of the way you feel.
    He sounds like an amazing guy, that all girls want.
    I like how you described each and every loving or caring thing he did, it added a little extra to the poem.
    Wonderful flow and great vocabulary.
    Overall, fantastic job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanei

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I can relate. I only wish that it was a little longer. But other then that it is great the way it is. Another 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Layla

    Wow, Again, amazing work- I can really identify with how you feel. (believe me, I've been there, too!) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww. I love how you were describing each and everyone of the sweet things that he did or was like. It just helped build up the emotion for the end, when you put for you it's love but to him you're just friends. He sounds like an incredible guy, what every girl dreams of in life! ;) The last stanza was by far my favorite and I really enjoyed this poem also because the flow was perfect and the rhyming wasn't forced at all. Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Lily

    I know how you feel...if only what we want we could have...and if it turns out bad...if only we could go back..i loved the flow and the whole plot of the poem good work...keep it up.

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