The girl in the mirror

by Emma Brown   Nov 13, 2006


The girl in the mirror is naughty.
She cuts herself and cries.
She hurts a lot of people.
She always lies.

The girl in the mirror is naughty.
She breaks her own heart.
She loves someone that hates her.
She tears herself apart.

The girl in the mirror is naughty.
She bleeds and is so sad.
She does not know anything about love.
She treats people as though she is mad.

The girl in the mirror is naughty.
She lives her life alone.
She does not care about herself.
She cannot call anywhere, home.

The girl in the mirror is naughty.
She cannot breathe, she cannot see.
She sits alone all day and all night.
That girl in the mirror is me.

© Emma Brown

Comments and votes appreciated.
Much love, Emma xox

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...this is one of my favourites on the site.
    The line that really got to me was 'That girl in the mirror is me.'
    I can really relate to this poem.

    It was written beautifully, and I enjoyed the wording and rhyme scheme and imagery muchly.

    I loved everything about this.

    A well deserving 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, great work.....
    this poem is written very nicely and it deserve a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Excellent poem.
    I like the
    ''The girl..''
    ''she..''
    ''she..''
    ''that..''
    In all the stanzas.

    5/5

    Take care,
    N-G-C-S.

  • 17 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Wow uve expressed everything rele nicely ... keep it on

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