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by .:JustinFromAbove:.   Nov 14, 2006


As i think of my past,
Nothing comes in mind so fast,
I look at myself years ago,
People made me feel so low.

I've turned myself in and out,
Lots of years of peoples doubt,
I lived my life on my own,
No one to hold, all alone.

Days going by all so quick,
If only our lives we could pick,
Choosing a nice and happy one,
Everyday having so much fun.

Back to reality not this dream,
Moving down this one way stream,
Cant go back for its the past,
In my life, lonliness will last.

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  • 19 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    "If you want to be happy, then be happy. nothing is there to stop you."

    People get raped and beaten and they should be happy? and its their own fault if their not happy?

    Well my little brother.. i liked the poem, it was good 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 19 years ago

    by Olive - tree

    Thankyou for sharing. its lovely to know that many people go through this. maybe in some other poetry you have you could or have elaborated a bit more? xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    "If only our lives we could pick,
    Choosing a nice and happy one,
    Everyday having so much fun."

    if I could pick a life, I wouldn't choose an easy one. the more ups and downs, the better you can be in the end. it all depends on ourselves. It doesn't have anything to do with life. if you want to be happy, then be happy. nothing is there to stop you.
    a very good rhyming poem:) thanks for sharing it!
    peace,
    Marjan

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