It's not easy

by Jade   Nov 14, 2006


I thought everything was ok
then it just suddenly hit me....
Everythings not, just a thought, gripping me in my stomach, pain inside my head, hurting my heart. I just need to find the right path to walk down...but I can't.
It's a lonely road when your on your own, none takes outa hand to hold, if I lose, then i fail, that thought just haunts me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow, that's really good. Maybe just put it into coloumns so we can see where the ryhms are but even with it like this, it's awesome. It flowed really well.

    keep up the great work:)
    your friend,
    alissa

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