Thoughts I Wish I Didn't Have

Mmmm.....Well done here. I think that by far my favorite stanza was the second one and I love how you ended it too, a good ending I think is one of the most important essentials in poetry and you nailed it. The only thing I see that was wrong was to me the flow was a little tiny bit off in some parts. You're a good writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Aww this was sad but the last line maybe it sweet. wonderful work you have here. 5/5

~Kristina

Interesting Poem. I would say that this poem could be inspirational too. The second stanza was my favorite.
Here's some things you might change: The poem was long in a sense that repeatedly used "fill words" You could either summarize it or add more imagery like:

"A place where roses bloom black
And the ground swallowed by soot"

One more thing, It felt like you were talking about a place (death?) and then suddenly turned to deep life lessons. You could improve the transition.

Good Write!! Keep it up