Awwww very cute poem hun =]
I loved it...so who was that one for?
Keep up the good work, all of your poems rock my socks.

Aww, sweet poem, hun` .
Whoever it is to, they must be pretty special(:
I liked it a lot .
Don`t have n/ethin` bad to sey .
Keep it up` .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Waaa so sweet. You'll rot my teeth, you know? ^___^ Lovely poem, though. Honest and sweet and SO full of emotion. 5, certainly.

Aww.. thats really sweet. A sad story behind it, and i'm sure its hard to wait for someone that means so much to you. A great write, with heaps of emotion and a good flow. I love the last stanza most. =] 5/5

Tammie

So sweet yet beautiful penned dedicated to a friend...flowed well with beautiful emotions write...marvellous! an enjoyed my read here, kep them coming, best wishes, and take care, bert ~

Awww Nelle, this was such a sweet poem! Ohhh how I have missed your poetry! So very sweet and honest, I'm sure the person adores you for it!

.. P.S I am still so much cooler than you.

... P.P.S. I miss your smiles :P

LOVE the poem!! great work:)

That is really sweat.....hope you see your lover soon
Jennifer

Aww this was sweet. i love friendship poems like this! there was a bit of a problem with the flow in some places, but overall it was pretty well written

EEEMMMM

...fantastic. there is so much emotion and caring and feeling put into this poem that I was feeling it as I read. I can tell that whoever you wrote this for means ALOT to you, and is a very lucky person. I liked the last stanza alot...the rhythm and rhyme were near perfect.

Keep it up :)

Awesome flow it goes really smooth, since you live in pensacola, and this line...I'm waiting for you I know your getting out soon. is this to smeone in the navy???

Fantastic.
It put a huge smile on my face.
Whoever you are writing to must be a very special person to you. :)
Perfect flow and choice of words.
5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Very well put

I like it...

That was so sweet. It sounds like it was written for somebody very close to your heart. Excellent work. =]

This is a very touching friendship poem flowing straight from the heart

Aww this was really sweet and heart warming. I usually don't like reading friendship poems, but this one was beautiful, great work hun, i loved it.

--Steph