Inside

by DarkJem   Nov 16, 2006


It's dark
I don't like it.

It's empty
I don't like it.

It's alone
I don't like it.

It's broken
I don't like it.

It's pain
I don't like it.

It's a shell
I don't like it.

It's trapped
I don't like it.

It's sad
I don't like it.

It's hurt
I don't like it.

It's betrayed
I don't like it.

It's me

©2006 Natalie Hawke

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  • 17 years ago

    by aimee

    Wow that was an awesome poem, i like the way it was self revealing and its way of capturing the readers,
    xx [[lots of love, Nat]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Crazygirl yeh

    Well well well what do we have here its all right but mines better oviousley.

  • 17 years ago

    by livingxlifesxnightmare616

    Good poem but downfall because its about herself

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