My promise to you

by GraCiE   Nov 18, 2006


I'll never let my heart run dry
like a river thats lost is flow,
I'll never let my love be pointless
like an arrow without its bow

I'll always be here by you side
like your shadow bound to your heart,
I'll always make you smile greatly
like i did right at the start.

I'll never let you cry with tears
like a cloud that bares cold rain,
I'll never let you fall with fear
like a lost soul full of pain.

I'll always tell you everything
like a bird that sings its song,
I'll always Build you up again
like a tree thats tall and strong.

I'll never be a cheat or a liar
Like a snake with poison teeth,
I'll never fall to other depths
like a rock sinking underneath.

I'll always Be natural
like a sprouting sunflower seed,
I'll always feel this love for you
Because you are all i need

please comment on my poems, i would much appreciate it. thanx x x

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awh this was sweet:] i really liked it. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I'll always Be natural
    like a sprouting sunflower seed,
    I'll always feel this love for you
    Because you are all i need

    This was a beautiful verse to convey your feelings that you will always be there. I have such trouble explaining feelings of love and this was amazing.
    Natural it should be. Awesome Job.
    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha

    This is really good. It's a beautiful poem. You have talent. :)