Nature Calls Out Your Name

Haikus really take a nack to write. You have done a wonderful job portraying the beauty that a haiku holds.

I would seperate them more though ... maybe put an ******* between each one to make it easier for the reader to read. At first it seems as though it is one poem that does not go well together; however, when broken up like a haiku should be then it is wonderfully written.

On the Screaming Stream you have it as a 5-6-5 instead of "Trickling between the rocks" maybe you could write Trickling down between the rocks or even Trickling in between the rocks.

Just some suggestions. Overall, you did a wonderful job. Keep practicing and writing!

--Sher

Nature is alive and you have that here

Oh dear god Rikki. You outdid yourself, thats beautiful. :)

-Ciar

That was beautiful.
~kayla-sarah~