Comments : I'm waiting for your Black Parade...

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hey I love your poem! It's so good! Thank you so much for commenting my poem by the way it means so much to me! Well, buh-bye!
    Burning~Wings

  • 17 years ago

    by tatiana

    Very wise words you have there...
    i totally agree with everything you say

  • 17 years ago

    by celi

    Hey that's an amazing poem!i really liked it!keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved reading this poem it reads flawlessly. It really honestly does. It also in my opinion deserves nothing less than a 5/5. Fantastic job hun.

    Also on your comment, I thought about it. She Cut 's' Too Deep, wouldn't really work. Since she cut too deep and that's why she passed. I don't know I guess it's the way you look at it.

    Anyways keep writing you're very good at it.

    - blaine

  • 17 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    I really like this poem. it is deep and well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really very beautifully written...very inspirational with some great messages

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jay-Jammal

    Yet another great poem from you Jane..lovely and very clever words u use there...Well done once and again..and yeah i have to thank you for every second...

    PEACE-Jay

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Lol i love your poem, it sneds out a good message (well in my interpretation anyway) lol its really good makes me feel fuzzy hehe keep up the good work xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by Mohamed

    Wow...i'm really speechless here..lol..all i can say is Great poem...keep the good job up...5/5

    Peace
    Mahamed!

  • 17 years ago

    by IzL

    Its diffrent, but its good
    xoxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    W.o.w.
    this poem made me cry.
    im speechless. its really...beautiful.
    Please continue to write. I love your work.

    Always.
    Koriey

  • 17 years ago

    by BLAYZE

    Haven't heard from you in a while. your writings have inspired me so much. my sis talks about your writings all the time even now. and wonders if you will keep writing, i hope you do. all of you words mean so much to me, but her especially, this was a great write. hope all is well. always, blayze n kit.

  • 16 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I love this poem!!!

    Hey of course i remember you, how could I forget!!

    Thank you for the comments, and the help with As My Heart Melts...

    <3 Joclyn