Thanks

by damaris avila   Nov 20, 2006


I just want to thank you
for eveything you do
for always being there for me
especiall when i was feeling blue
thank you for making me laughand for taking away all the bad
when i was feeling sad
and for always giing me a smile
when i wanted to cry for a mile
thank you for worrying about me
i just wanted to thank you for just being you

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  • 17 years ago

    by damaris avila

    Again thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Capitalize the i's and the beggining of the lines, and use commas when rhyming, but this is a very good poem, and i give it a 5/5!!!

    this is how it should look:

    I just wanted to thank you
    for eveything you do,
    for always being there for me
    especially when I was feeling blue.
    Thank you for making me laugh and for taking away all the bad,
    when I was feeling sad.
    And for always giing me a smile ,
    when I wanted to cry for a mile.
    Thank you for worrying about me
    I just wanted to thank you for just being you.

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