Undying Love

by I Love You Renee   Nov 21, 2006


Look at you, your eyes that sparkle bright
With beauty so divine
Roses never smelled this sweet and are jealous to compare

Smile giving light, shining through the darkest night
Eyes are gazing, hearts are beating
There is a pause, now lips are meeting

I said I love you
She said maybe . . . I will love you back

To you I give a piece of my heart
Something to treasure forever more

For you I would give up anything
I would do anything and everything
I would die so we would never part
You give my life meaning and a love I cherish

Every word that explains this feeling
I would give them all to you
This love we share is one described as perfect
Like you . . .

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  • 16 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh my.. amazing! good choice of words.. I love this poem! the flow was perfect! you're really good! - Beautiful poem.. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Miakoda

    WOW..... Yeah thats the only word I can use ....It's really good...You express yourself verywell...

  • 17 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    This is beautiful

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