Comments : A DISTANT GODDESS

  • 17 years ago

    by Forsaken

    This piece is filled with such pain and yet again such love. I love the fact that you expressed your feelings so vividly. This is an absolutely wicked piece. Good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I read this as the post in the contest. All I can say is WOW. It is absolutely flawless in my opinion and the flow was beautiful. Great Job.

    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    That was so good! T T
    you are very poetic! ^^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    WOW That is a skillfully written captivating dark poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Very interesting! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Whoa!!!..loved it just loved it!!
    loved how it flowed!!
    gr8 job
    bree xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Mitelia

    Whoa,
    it blew my socks off!
    you're great. honestly
    i just felt every
    word.
    how do you get it to flow so
    flawlessly?
    so beautiful :]
    i loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    I thought that it was really good, but maybe try to split it up into more stanzas to make it easier to read. justa suggestion:)

  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    I thought that it was really good, but maybe try to split it up into more stanzas to make it easier to read. justa suggestion:)