Incredible poem. flowed brilliantly without rhyme. =)

so sad, i know how u feel.
keep writing, things can only get better.
xxx

I really like that poem....i think alot of ppl like it .....ppl (i think) can relate to this poem.....i hope you can say "I love you" again....lovely POem..

"Yet the tears are of pain and my heart is nothing but dust,"

^Excellent. You have conveyed many of your thoughts using atmospheric language, some descriptive imagery and emotive terms. The above quotation was a great comparison, and it’s inevitable that many of us feel the same when in your situation. But hang tight- there’s a light at the end of every tunnel, so not to worry! :]

-Elysium.

Wow simply outstanding. I really loved it. you have a lot of talent my friend. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

A very beautiful and truthful poem. Excellent! ...

Dang hun thats good, u keep it up and i hope u and traci work out u r good together

Wow that was great i feel lyk that to but about a boy lol i hope you find some1 else if u have sum tym could u plz comment on a few of myn thanx x x x

Wow ur poem was full of emotion it was a really good one! Great write keep it up!

Great job Sandro and notify me when u write more sad poems cuz i love them =D

I know exactly where you're comming from, babe.
im here for you
great poem
=)
*sarah*

This poem is really good, I love the way you described it. It's really emotional and deep...
xoxroxyxox

Very nice, didint rhyme very much, but awesome meaning and a wise choice of lines =) I liked it, good job!

I loved the comparison to the candle. it was well written!! well done hun
Much love and many kisses,
Bex