Good poem you've wrote or was it the inner voices? whoever wrote it ,I think its very good! 555

Wow.. that's pretty deep. the first line is the best, i think. or maybe not the best, but it really gives the poem character. hoping someone with an actual mind will even understand it. anyways, great job!

Excellent poem. Full of good word choice. I also think that this poem has a nice rhythm to it. Keep up the good work.5/5

Well done, i liked this poem, i liked the idea of inner voices ehich i believe are your thoughts and feelings, maybe. keep writing. you have talent

I like it, i feel the same way, when i write best the voice in my head just blurts it out and i gotta write it fast enough to keep up lol

You have wonderful voices, it is a beautiful poem! And it written ever so nicely. I really do not have anything "bad" to say about this poem I think it is so well written!

-AnnMarie

Lol thanks! i loved reading it! i hope u write loads more!!!

I love this poem. i like how you didnt just use "everyday" words. you actually used words with meaning. and i love how with your work you actually need to think about it. i love the poem. great job.

Wow. that is a nice poem. I think there may be a typo, i'm sure it is recognized (the spelling). and there's one line that i feel needs another syllable. "literate whispers." it's just the way i read it. kept making me think whisperers. but i dont know if thats a real word. haha.

thanks for your comment on as you walk. i fixed the ending, well typos i found. maybe thats what threw you off. feel free to read it again. i hope its more clear.