Werent all for you

Good poem, kinda short but a strong one.
I enjoyed reading this.

"The tears i cryed werent all for you.''
''The scares i have hurt me too.''

I can relate to those two lines so much, which made it a little bit more personal to me.
Good write :)

4/5

xo angelique

A few spelling mistakes but overall this was one of your better ones. There was more emotion and in a short paragraph you really created good imagery. Id like to see some more sad poems from you, and not so many love ones.
love Tara-Kay

Emotional and to the point. Keep up the good work! 5/5

You lied ta me n thats why were done.
You said you loved me then why are you gone.

Fave lines ^^^^^^^

It shows how much you cared.
You let go of all that we shared

^i loved that line...soo good!>..5/5 from me..comment back pleasee!