I love you

by Miakoda   Nov 27, 2006


Just hold me in you r arms
Or lay by myside
Shh away my tears
Hush away my pain

Let me take your heart
Or take your hand in mine
Vent all my frustration
End my missery

Ask for me again
Love me
With all your heart
And stand with me for ever
Yearn for me like I do for you
Stay with me because

I love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Once again i loved the way u layed out this poem, short, concise, great

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very good poem, short, sweet and right ti the point....GP

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Ohh. This was such a sweet poem!! I'm not very good at writing love poems but i love reading them!! heh.

    a few suggestions though...

    "Shh away my tears" < - you should try changing that...I know what you were trying to say here...but the "shh" makes the poem seem more like a child wrote it...you know?

    and "missery" = "misery". Thats it. =]
    Great poem though, I really enjoyed it!! Keep it up!!!

    -Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Kasie

    This is an amazing poem keep up the great work

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