Tears

by Almost broken   Nov 29, 2006


My tears always fall
Burning my face as they roll down
But they never hit the ground
They linger in the air
Surrounding me like I were in a river
And I try to breathe
But I cant
I try to swim to the top
But it never ends
The more I cried
The bigger it got
I tried to stop crying
But I just couldn't
Now it's to late
I'm drowning
Falling
Falling into the darkness that's inside of me
The darkness I made to never end
I built this river
I built this river to have no end
Like the darkness
This river was built to drown in

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Falling into the darkness that's inside of me

    i really love this line, it's great imagery, and the way you began your poem was excellent, i really like your ideas and use of words, great poem! xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristen

    Yes i know but its not word for word like avril leveignes mine got bits and pieces of difference and not only that. thats how i feel inside.

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Again this is another wonderful poem that held so much emotion! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The pain is felt in this write, it expresses a deep sadness in your heart. May you one day find the peace and joy you seek in your heart.

    sadaddy

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