Slowly

by brianna   Nov 29, 2006


If you could know
the feelings I get
thinking of you
and the possibilities

slowly falling
barely crawling
relentlessly bawling
cause I love you

you see me as just me
and nothing more
I feel for you so much
the butterflies are there

slowly falling
barely crawling
relentlessly bawling
cause I love you

please don't let this end
we could be great
I will not change
can you love me for me?

highly flying
running through the wind
smiles and more
cause you love me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Nicely quaint and very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good descriptive words Nice job I liked this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    Hey I really liked this a lot. First a love that is not returned and then bam! True love and they live happily ever after! Good Job!

    Astryd

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A great poem,
    i love the choice of words you used in these sentences:

    slowly falling
    barely crawling
    relentlessly bawling

    5/5

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