Misty

by Beautiful Chaos   Nov 30, 2006


You come to me through the sweetest mist,
Seemingly a ghost,
I cannot touch you,
Though I feel you,
Trapped here in almost,
Almost loving,
Almost touching,
Almost waking dreams,
I close my eyes every night,
To find what could have been...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I always enjoy looking at peoples' older work because you get to see how much they've grown as a writer and you're no exception. I really enjoyed reading this and thought that it created a really mysterious almost creepy atmosphere but can see the improvement in your writing.

    Em xXx

    PS The repetition of the word "almost" was really effective

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is beautiful, short but still very powerful, you described emotions superbly. I don't prefer love poetry but this piece is great! It really deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I love your poem keep up the great work!

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