"Will you ever return to this spot
Where in your youth you
Played and chipped at my skin,
Where the initials of your love grew old."

My fave stanza.
I read it through twice to get the full effect and your words were amazing
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*

What a wonderful poem. The feelings you have given to the tree makes it seem alive. Iread this one wto my grandchildren so they would understand the importance of the trees in our world. excellent job!

I love the imagery. you really have a passion for nature! i wish you the best of luck with your poetry; this one is beautiful!

~Rain

Stunning poem, the most amazing imagery I've come across here! There is real passion and depth in your words and your talent... well I'm in awe.

Fantastic work, would love to read more

LF
XxX

I love it. The use of nature really brough the effects of the poem out. I am so glad you suggested it to me, I would have never found it on my own. If you like hearing about nature and fantasy, try my new one, The Magic World. I give you a 5/5 and hope to see more of your work soon!

I love how u put things, your definatly going on my favs

Well Tom you certainly are very eloquent when expressing yourself, I think the older i get the sillier i get. Your poem actually brought a tear to my eye, it destroys me to see how thoughtless mankind is to a gift that is only on loan. Your poem is absolutely beautiful, very well written

Wow..this is excellent! From start to finish
you took me through the joy and saddness
of this tree..a great write!
Take care.