Hope lies within the future

by Keath   Dec 1, 2006


Upon the edge of a forest so green,
Lays this little weeping girl, yet nobody has seen,
Her tears slither along her cheek so fair.
Though there was no one with whom she could share,
The amount of pain that laid her soul bare.

Upon the edge of a shore so white,
Sits this little crying boy, who lost his fight.
He tried to protect his mother from fate,
Though she told him he could not beat this create.
Now he would simply remember this sickening date.

Upon the edge of a sea so cobalt,
Rest these little howling lass, her tears so salt.
She was wishing that she did not have to go further.
Though she was condemned of a murder,
She praised to the Lord to stay her herder.

Upon the edge of a cliff so high,
Stands this little sobbing kid, wishing he could fly,
His tiny bloodshed fists cramped in final defeat.
Though the big red marks were still flaming of heat,
He couldn't yet believe it would be so concrete.

Let's pray together, little children of the lost,
That the memories of these moments are frost,
But that they will never be our final chapter.
We are all abandoned, every one of us unsaid.
Just believe, little children under the big one's scepter,
That we will rule once they are dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    You are a very talented writter. I enjoy your work. The flow is good as well as the strucutre and the rhyming is outstanding. Wonderful Job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I really enjoyed reading your poem! Keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Amazing.. Simply Brilliant. Truly.

    there were only 2 tiny things i could even say anyhting about-
    Though she was condemned of a murder, i think this line should be a few syllables longer to enhance the flow.
    and - big red
    big red.. c'mon! 2 three-letter adjectives! i mean really! maybe instead - Though the swollen crimson marks? huh huh? lol.

    sorry buti really love this poem. i love the repeating of the 1 words. and the metaphors and the rhyme sheme and how it changed.

    Simply Amazing. =]

    x3 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was excellent! Everything seemed to flow perfectly, and the words and phrases you used were just brilliant. Good job.