Beautiful Mess (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   Dec 2, 2006


Be all you can be, the
End is near
And you can't keep going
Until you find love
The one and only person I trust
In the world
Forever and ever
Until the day I die
Lying in this beautiful mess

Moments before, the
End of all time, I
Sit and ponder
Sigh a little too saying what a beautiful mess

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I have written one of these, but this one is truly original. 'Be all you can be' reminds me of the army, and that's sort of the image I had in my head when reading the poem. I imagined some soldier sitting on the ground in some foriegn country, miles away from home, surrounded by dead bodies of strangers and soldiers he had befriended, thinking about his girl back home...and how beautiful she is. And reality and his fantasy merge---what a beautiful mess. Cool poem ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Your poems so far are stright forward they jsut are..no detial but thats a unique style sum can master sum can't. great job.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Oh I loved this poem. Keep up the good work. This is a very good poem:)

  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    That was a good poem. I liked it. It was very creative and thoughtful. Keep up the execllent work Joe. 5/5 from me my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by rainbowliciouz

    Joe boo this was one of the best poems ive ever read keep the good poems coming

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