You vent very well. Strong emotion breeds poety. If this isn't your best work it still belongs up near the top.

Good job

I love this one lots.. it's simpler than your other ones, so much easier for my head to understand. it does sound like a lullabye, too. great poem.

Nice. it took me a few seconds to get the title, how it related to the poem. once i did i was like !!! right...
i really liked the poem. it was simple, yet really well written.