Wow debbie it must be hard to have a long distance relashionship! I can feel your heartache. Great write.

I agree with diana those first two lines of the last stanza really grab u we all have had moments where we've anticipated an answer sometimes the answer we want isn't always the answer we get if any excellent poem 5/5

This is truly touching.Your sister mentioned youir work and I am very impressed.The flow and rythmn is perfect, but is the emotion that matters.

Peace, Love, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

That was very good, i like it because it was true.
i think the flow in the last stanza could be improved, but apart from that, it was a good write
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Thats a relly good one!
a BIG well dun from me! :D
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Incredible. As a writer, you put very vivid emotions into this poem and it made the poem amazing. You had a great flow and your choice of wording was perfect. I also really liked your ending to the poem, a good ending makes the poem better at whole. Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Very nice, sad. excellant as usual

Very well writen!I liked your flow of words and how you express yourself!!!Very well and I am looking forward to reading more of your peoms!

Keep writing,
Key

Wow, this is amazing. Splendid, really.
Everyone should read this..

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Wow! this is so sad...i know exactly what you're going through....great flow and very well written...good job!

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