Besides the lack of flow in the last two lines of the first stanza, this poem leaves a WOW! I mean it was so good.
so Heaven smiled even when it rained.

That line left me speechless!
Great job!
Charisma*

Oh my...What a beautiful piece. I feel like...aaahh! I can't even explain myself, let alone wipe this tear from my face. I think I'm going to be sad all night after reading this. Keep it up deary

Beautiful piece of writing. Very well written!

Very good and full of meaning
quite sad too
5/5
me x x x

Wonderful write Mary, superbly penned!!!

Thats life.....to be honest, u r still better than many...atleast u hv moments to cherish.. :o)

Great poem

all the best and take care