Very good poem. I loved it. The only thing I saw that you might want to chance is that in the third line of the second stanza at should be to. Other then that this poem is great. You are a great poet. Keep up the good work:)

You mean more than the world at me
-i think you meant "to" not "at"

aww this is really sad. i'm sorry if this is true.. i'm not sure who it's about, but you did a great job. 5/5

~Kristina

Heartbreaking. beautiful.

Im goin to start out by sayin "En Memoria de Lillian (In Memory of)". Of course I didnt know her but I show luv 2 ere body. I really liked dis poem. I felt da same way when 3 of my homeboys were murdered n 1 commited suicide b/c of it. NE wayz stay strong n keep ya head up.

Stay Playa,
SC

BTW I couldnt help but to laugh when I read one of ur commentz n ur name waz "Do dogs think in English?" LOL!!

Im sorry about your loss. This is a really good poem and I gave it a 5/5

Two lines really stand out for me:

my eyes will always look for you
but it's my heart that sees

One never stops looking, for one more glimpse!

This was a very touching poem. everything flowed well together and the rhyme scheme was swell as well. great job!

Wow, this is a really heart felt write. The flow in this poem was flawless. You seem to write with great emotion and it shows in the amazing poems you write. Wonderfully touching read. 5/5

marcella

This is so sweet. im sorry for your loss. Well expressed...

Hey,
is sad and sweet at the same time, im sorry for you loss, i love your choice of words.
kisses stephanie

The syntax was abit off in this which left the floww not sit well. The message was strong however and was a great tribute to the person you wrote this for I am sure they would be proud Good Job. This is the thrird Poem Plot121

Great job on the poem : ) its deep i love it <33 tabi

Touching poem.
What happened?

I'm sorry for your loss. Especially hard to deal with at a young age. Considering this was a few years ago. It is always hard to lose someone. I hope you still think of this person often :)