Katie, Wonderful job! I really enjoyed reading this.

Dear Katie,
I like your poem... Be brave and face your destiny. "Even a lump of carbon goes through heat and pressure to turn into a diamond"
..And that's wht u are.And i'm with you in whtever you do.
All the best.
Adios,
Neo.

I found the poem curiously disturbing and yet it drew me in. Some lines were pure magic.

The chilled air, it passed through me this evening
As the leaves howled and mourned, I cried
For what is, what was and what never will be
As the lights flickered and the people turned, I cried
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Such touching lines sweet Katie!
They just grip my heart in a tight squeeze.

A very unique write Katie.

There is something about the echo of memory
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I loved this line. It speaks so loudly within the poem.

Take care sweet Katie!