What your loss has caused me to feel

by mathiax   Dec 6, 2006


My eyes are tearing
From the pain that you have caused me
My lips are trembling
From the wanted touch of your juicy lips that would never be for me
My ears are ringing
From the wanted sounds of your voice talking to me
My body is shattering
From the wanted feel of your body stuck to me
My heart is bleeding
From the knife that you have plugged in me
My mind is breaking
From the questions and answers that have revealed themselves to me
My soul is splitting
From the betrayal of your love that you have reassured to me
My trust is collapsing
From the treachery of your heart toward me
And although all those things have lead others to hating
However I still love you from the very depth in me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Hehe.. its okie hun ! he's a tooooot!!! so.. the tooooot with him !!! =p

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx! its my first rhyming poem...sucks i know but im trying here....and to be honest...hehehehehehe.....how should i say this..emmmmmmm......its about you and what your bf made you feel.....i know im a jerk for writting that and soo soon but you inspired me to and im sorry if it made you more depressed bi i truelly am!!! i love ya and pls smile again!!! at least just once!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    ... well.. such a bad time for me to read such a thing.. since i just broke up with my bf and all that .. eh..
    anywayz! its really good mai .. keep them coming! =)

    5/5