Aww that's really sad.. full of emotion Hun and very well written.. well done 5/5 x

Wow, another beautiful and heartfelt poem, i loved it! you're an amazing writer wonderful job 5/5

I loved this poem. Wow.. I can relate to this so much and you did an amazing job on describing everything. You wrote it to where the reader can feel your emotions coming out throughout the poem. I'm sure that this is something that many people can relate to. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well. Great write! 5/5

Awe, sad and heartfelt. Beautifully penned. I like the rhyme scheme. Nice job putting your emotions to paper!

Good write... it was heart felt and emotional... so true that love is illogical and has no reasoning... many people should be able to relate.

Wow.
That was amazing yet a very sad story about love. I have been through this and I can tell you it's not the best feeling to keep going back to the same guy and not being loved back. Very easy to relate to. Overall, wonderful job! Great flow and perfect wording. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I like this one alot.. its got great flow..

Great flow, imagery throughout was good, rhyme scheme worked well.
keep writing,
much love, Tara-Kay

A sad, heartfelt read. The emotian in it was outstanding, and the story was quite sad. I know many people can probably relate to it, Throughtout the peom, there was an excellent imagery created. It had a great flow, and was really meaningful. Keep up the great work! xx

Aww, this was so sad. I loved every word of this, and I can somewhat relate. Your rhymes were perfect and the whole thing flowed very well, great work.

--Steph

Wow!!! this is my most favorite out of what i read so far...you really have talent and this poem relates to what i feel for i have felt this way before... keep up the great work and i look forward to reading some more of your poems...5/5...

This is so great. i expect nothing else. this is one of my favourites. the wording and words you used are so unique.

5/5 cause it is excellent!!

David

Really brings me to the thought of is love really out there, and i beleive it trully is =) your poems really get me thinking about life lol! great job yet again!! =)