I could not agree more... well said.

I liked this one a lot...and i've know what you mean in this poem what we want sometimes doesnt go the way we want them to be... keep up the great work... 5/5...thank you... :)

So true, all of what you said. once again, great work. you speak so honestly of things that everyone thinks.

This is amazing..if you dont mind, did sum1 break up with you?

So.. I was sort of hoping I didn't have to read another one of your love poems because they bring back bad memories that were once good. If you know what I mean.. but I guess you have an inspired heart, one I once had. Keep it alive man. Keep writing too.

How sad. Love can be so painful for some. You have expressed this vert well. Excellent job on your poem. Take Care Cindy

I voted a 5 for this poem because I have never read a poem where someone used so many different words that rhyme with forever. Everyone always writes the cliche'd ones. I loved the poem overall, it had a very strong tone to it.
wonderful write once again.

Really this is a play on words. . . emotional words. . .It works so well because the reader undoubtly (sp?) is sitting there thinking "soo true"

Lovely
laura
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Man, I was all happy with these wonderful love poems you write and this one crapped on my happy haha. Besides that, this is so well written with a flow of perfection. 5/5

marcella

This is great!! i know how u feel!!

~shanny~

A lot of meaning in this poem. You've expressed yourself well. But why so pessimistic? Love can last forever, if you care enough.

-Travis[InABottle]

Fooled by seven letters,
If not "love you" then "forever",
I'd believe in forever better,
If it actually meant never.

That is a perfect stanza. Great poem. Enough said. =]

Good poem

An amazing poem!
I really like this!
xxxx

Awe... i liked this poem. I hope it is forever though. Great work 5\5

So I don't believe in forever,
Because it's just a word

i think this has changed now hasnt it baby :P... but nonetheless i loved it because i didnt believe in forever either until now :P... 5/5 great job

i lovee you <3