Comments : Me and my dad

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Very good poem. Very unfortunate if true. :( I'm so sorry........

    ~~Spanish Class

  • 17 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Wow thats....breathtaking amazing hun simply amazing

    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow jason its so heart breaking i love it

    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by sexy_emo_kelsey

    Omg if this happened to you I will go and kick your dads ass:) luv u and this is so sad it is going to make me cry love/always
    ~~~kelsey~~~

  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Very well written and very sad. I am sorry.......
    Well Jason you have a five out of five from me my friend, take care
    Love Evil Penguin (Mykel Megan Mapel)

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    Wow....so much pain....scares me

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    WO..i wanted to cry! so bad....it holds so much pain...and sadness...im touched.......the poem was really a great work of art!..and im not saying it just cuz were friends...i really trully mean it...

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The flow wit this wasnt that graceful HOWEVER it fit the intensity of the poem so in fact this peiom is really good. i enjoyed it its sad but im not gonna puty u but i am sry. keep this up great job.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Very sad...