That warm day

by robin milford   Dec 7, 2006


Today is freezing
I am a human icicle
That's Iowa weather tho
Temp is running below zero
but it is not always like this

When summer comes
The sun will shine
and defrost everything
The temp will be up high
I can't wait to play in the sun
Wear my short shorts, low cut tops
Hear the children laugh and play
Running in the streets
What fun we will have
those summer days
Here in my home town

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem good theme and good flow great job and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Eh.. this poem is cute.. but it doesnt really show emotion you say you cant wait for summer and all its perks like shorts and kids playing.. but rather than doing that you can say how it makes you feel.. something maybe like you love the feeling of being hit by the hot breeze walking out of your house and the smile that comes to your face watching children play happily.. ect

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is so simple yet meaningful.Iowa is much like my home in Illinois(we have a saying here-'If you don't like the weather, wait ten minutes and it will change').In fact my daughter lives in Dubuque.I relish and feel alive in every season(esp. autumn).I'm glad I grew up in this areaThis is so descriptive of normal life in anytown, USA.But only those of us in the area can appreciate the 4 seasons.Wonderfully expressed.

    GaryJ

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