I really wouldn't know how this is but you did a good job, you summed it up well also 5/5 great job

Sincerelly,
Katlyn

Great poem. very sweet

Though its posted in explicit category but somehow i am never able to find any true explicit stuff in ur poems.....its so clean and romantic or its the way u present...anyway...i loved it.. :o)

all the best and take care

Awwww another brilliant poem :)) soo full of love and excitment too lol :)) loved it :))

Aw that was nice. Not dirty in the least. Ah true love. Fab poem!

Kelly
xx

I love this. you know how to be clean but get your point across! amazing poem!

I like it for obvious reasons ;)
Well done honey
Love you xx

Really, really, REALLY good! Wow, keep it up girl! you rock

Oh, that makes me feel like doin' what your poem says! *winks

perfectly written without malice! 5/5

Awesome

That poem was great, 5 gold stars!

Hey I liked this alot, very sweet.
~Kyra~

Did you do that with Marcus? lol! Just askin'... No offense...

Good rhyme scheme. Very sexy. Reminds me of "new love". Ya know? When you first get with your "person" and cant even wait to get home.