DAAAAANNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That poem was a deep and raw poem Jason!!! I SWEAR!!!!! Dat was too good! You need to get dat published and it sounded so sad!!! You're a good poet Jason boy! TTYL!

Hey Jason, this is a dam good poem!!!!! keep up the great work. i love it because its deep! could you do me a fav and return the fav.?

Love Always,
*Jessica*

OMG!!!!!! I LOVE IT...ITS SAD AND MORE SAD. and its really good so keep it up

It was a good poem. But it would of been written better. I liked it tho 4/5.

That's good Jas....A little scary...lol

Touching and well written, 5/5

Wow jason i feel your pain, i kinda feel like that sometimes

Wow depth in its finest very powerful i love it you really got some talent bro

Its a real good poem, but your running your thoughts together. You would benifit from making 3 lines out of the first two.

Thta hit me hard i know how u feel i mean sumtiems the past holds us and we cry so much e cant cry anymore yet we alwasy find a way to..its complicateed but your poem speaks volumes..great job...

lissa

AWE....sad...i love it! lol

Wow, that was so good, && im not just saying that...i really think that you have a passion for poetry...keep them coming jasn

Wow, that was so good, && im not just saying that...i really think that you have a passion for poetry...keep them coming jasn

^^oops--it didnt fit....srry!

Deep stuff i can really relate to it, this is an easy topic to go cliche in but you did super well on avoiding it, again love the intensity and the realness of this.

lissa

OMG jason
i love it this is a great poem and is ever so descriptive again great work keep it up

Very sad. 5/5

Wow ... you have nothing to be jelious over. You are an awsome writter. Great poem. Can't wait to read more.
Jennifer

Wow.. this is really good

Yeah! thats really good! i liked it! it was sad and reminded me how many jerks are out there. including some girls. I liked it well written!!!