There must be some place better

by Bridget   Dec 9, 2006


I feel so lost,
like I don't belong
Why aren't I loved?
What have I done wrong?

My body is living,
but my soul is long dead
My heart is starving for love,
it needs to be fed.

Life is always dark,
as black as the night
What will the future hold?
Will there ever be light?

Will the sun ever come out?
Will the birds start singing?
Will these monsters go away,
or will they keep on living?

I need someone to answer me,
but there's no one there
No one to love me,
nobody to care.

What's the point in living,
when I don't feel real?
There must be some place better,
where my heart can heal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I can relate I enjoyed the last to lines most. excellent poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Beautiful. thats the best word 2 describe this. everything was perfect. you asked some good questions, and if u get the answers let me know!:P anywho, amazing work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I feel the samee..
    but keep your head up high and you will find ur place..its like ur locked up in a box too ..right?

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Wow! This poem touched a soft spot. Every word was perfect (except i would change NO ONE to NOBODY. Gives an extra syllable that's needed!)
    5/5
    ~Stephen White
    ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I really enjoyed reading this poem...i felt like this plenty of times before...but dont give up hope... excellent job!