Secretly Saved

by StephanieH   Dec 9, 2006


A Year Full Of Stress
Pressured On Her Heart
Unable To Breathe
Unable To Start

Shatters The Heart Of A Lonely Girl
Continued Pattern Which Never Ends
Every Breath She Took
Her Heart Continued To Bend

She Struggled through Her Life
Had Done Everything She Could
Never Asked For Anything More
Even When She Should

A Magical Wish She Always Wanted
So Happens, It Can Never Come True
Now That Her Life Is Finished
The Only Reason, Is You

She Was Desprate For A Change
Never Would She Hurt A Fly
Such A Precious Girl
Now, Can Never Ask Why

Never! Would She Hurt Someone
She Didn't Deserve To Die
I Hate To Replay The Past
Back To Her One Final Cry

I Hope She's In A Better Place
God Forgive Every Mistake
Everyone Only Wish
Is For Her To Awake

Lay Down The Last Rose
Upon Her Grave
Every Memory, Never Forgotten
Every Memory Secretly Saved

***I wrote this poem, I thought a lot about it. and put a lot of work into it, please comment and rate this poem, it'll mean a lot thank you***

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cedric

    Really Good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I must say you did a really fantastic job on this poem i can relate because i just lost my best friend about a year ago and i know it hurts but keep you head up girly : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Morg

    Thanks for the comment....81 visits and you're the only one who commmented. guess its my turn and this is cute too. sorry about whoever it was but its really good. 5/5 to you too.

  • 17 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Well all your hard work and look you did excellent on this poem its one of the greatest songs i've read so far...

    Lizzy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jesus

    Nice. I liked this one more than the others. Though it had a few spelling mistakes.