A Broken Promise, A Broken Life

by Tess Beautifully Broken   Dec 9, 2006


With a feeling of despair,
I layed there all alone,
It was that night we met,
And we began talking on the phone.

We talked for hours,
Until night turned to day,
I knew I loved you,
When we never ran out of anything to say.

I know you don't remember,
But that night was the best of my life,
And now we are here,
Your words striking me like a knife.

You tell me to ask her,
Ask her what she wants,
Its not her that hurts me,
Its your promise that haunts.

You promised me somthing,
Something that involves forever,
Oh,
How quickly it has turned to never.

You promised me your heart,
You said you\'d help me through every strife,
You promised me this love,
A love that means more to me than life.

A broken promise means nothing,
When a broken life is on the line,
So I\'m gunna move on,
I dont need you to shine.

As much as it hurts me,
I\'m taking back my heart,
I\'m walking away from you,
something I should have done from the start.

So you can have her,
This time I\'m leaving for sure,
Don\'t you dare beg me,
I dont need you anymore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Wow i really can relate to this i really like it good job. super good writing keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem. sorry to hear about that bad experience. anyway great job

  • 17 years ago

    by last_petal

    I like it so much.. moving on.. treading the way even though ur life is broken.. keep up the good work..

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashes

    Oh my gosh! I freakin love this!
    It's greatly written, and I can feel your emotions.
    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    WE HaVe s0mE siMiLariTies...ThaT U nEvEr tO faLL f0r gUy tHat's it...anyway, That's a Sad p0em MayBe I caN s0mEh0w reLatE to U...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...GOOD JOB