I wish I could take away your pain! You write with words that make the reader feel all your pain.

The loss and the extreme pain leap out of the page with the words you use. I feel for you and wish that someone can lift the bourden of loss that you suffer.

Very good poem. very sad. i enjoyed it. you write about human suffering and sadness with such skill. the best poems come straight from our souls

Wow...truly wonderful...it has so much emotion in it...i loved reading it...5/5.

...thank you so much for all the comments...

Still so intense, even with the passing of time. My husband passed away in 2000 ... but I did find love again ... in the spring of 2005, only to have him pass away that December. Twice is too hard to bare ... so I feel a kinship in your words.

Aw this was really sad and very powerful. good job expressing urself xx

This is so sad!

Wow, that is so powerful.

Wow...
So heartfelt and very heartwrenching to read.
You did a woonderful job at expressing yourself.

I dont have all your answers, i can just say you wrote down well the emotions of someone who is greiving and if only we could have them back.... keep writing xxxx