My Overflowing Glass

by Marisa   Mar 25, 2004


This pain is just too much,
I wish that you could see.
It's like a wild ocean,
Always drowning me.
Why can't you just help me?
Why can't you just try?
If I were to leave,
Would you say goodbye?
My pain if flowing over,
Like a glass too small.
If I take another step,
I'm scared that I might fall.
This pain is just too much,
Too much for me to take.
Please God, won't you help me?
Please, for heaven's sake!
I beg you with my life,
That isn't all that great.
Please god, can't you help me?
Or is it just too late?

Hey all, please comment. I'd really appreciate it. You can tell me if they suck, LOL. I won't send them out if they do. :p Later all!

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  • Really nice poem, well written. There's good rhyming in it. You shouldn't be worried about submitting your poems cos they're really good, you have absolutely nothing to worry about, you're talented !!!
    The people on this website are nice anyway they wouldn't leave nasty comments they'd just try and help you improve. I guess there probably are people who leave bad comments but that's probably because they can't write very well themselves !!
    Anyways thanks for you're comment and keep writing !!!

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    that's gawjus, but so sad. Thank you for the comment on my poem and vote. This is great. u r amazing
    luv Sammi
    xxx